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.:Sexy, Colorful Alise:.

KeikoMagari

Published: Jul 18, 2011

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Description

Her picture greatly surpasses Sicky's mainly because she is ~~sexy~~ colorful with more detail. Because of this, I'm redoing Sickness' picture so he can compete with her unfair ~~hotness~~ detail~

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Information on Alise Voronov

Alise is estimated to be around 20-21; it is known she is younger than Sickness and Kurosuke.
She works at Mr. Takanawa's music shop.
She, like Sickness, loves music more than life.
She is slightly a whore.
Her hair color changes daily, keeping with the same shades of pink, red and purple.
She is bisexual.
However, she has decided her heart, no matter what relationship she is in, belongs to Sickness.
She hates Kurosuke.
Her nationality is German/Russian/American.
She sports many tattoos and piercings.
She paints in her spare time.
She knows Xiao Fang has a liking to her, but she rejects him.
She also hates Maria De Luca
She takes pride in being able to play the bass guitar, along with piano and trumpet.

Personality
Loud, sassy, and seemingly uncaring towards what others think of her, Alise is a wild, sarcastic bitch who stands her ground and dares to defy. She is stubborn, strong-willed, and argumentative, someone who will attack when necessary and defend with all her might. She has been known to start fights more than stop them, and she's had and gave her number of bloody noses. She is pretty blunt, too, not sparing honesty, and deals out the truth to those who really need it often. She can be quite intimidating and out-spoken, probably the German in her. Despite her very brash, rough outer shell, inside Alise can be very compassionate and caring when she wants and needs to be. Since Sickness is the only one known to have made it past her hard outer surface, it is known that she is very frugal to whom she makes her friends; aalllttthhhouuugggh you'll often see her chatting with groups of people at bars and malls, we're not quite sure her relationship to those 'extras' are besides the occasional convo.

Appearance
(in detail)

Alise, inheriting her German/Russian-ness, is femininely broad, tall, and muscular_{(sadly more than Sickness:'D)}. To keep the 'in detail', she is about 5'9" to 5'10" tall, waist 26", bust 43", shoulder length about 12", 7cm. Her hair is particularly interesting, a long splice down the right side of her face, where it suddenly goes short up around her ears and neck; the color changes every day, as she's a freak for wild, unnatural things. Her signature accessories include the two loops and stud earrings, headphones usually around her neck or on her waist, and is often wearing a tank top. Her eyes are blue_{(more German reference)}, and her complexion is rather pale.

The Story of Alise
Alise's family history is a tad mysterious besides the way she curses her parents' name. Sicky and Kuro have assumed their own story of how she came from a wealthy family, only to be kicked out for some strange reason, yet they know that wherever she came from is still fueling her money since she continues to procrastinate at work and isn't worried about gaining or losing money. She met Sickness in the music shop when the he and Kuro began working there and fell into his arms the moment he crossed the threshold; hasn't kept her hands of him ever since.}

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Dr-Aim

Jul 24, 2011

Hello there, I come from #ProjectComment to comment on your piece !
Soooooo the first thing I'd like to say is...
"... okay let's go for some anatomy", because, well, there is no other way to put it than saying "hm yes some problems here."
So I thought a picture was worth thousands words and drew you a little something with some crappy words to explain myself :
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I tried to stick to your description : slightly muscular for a girl, sexy and everything, and stick to the original pose (althought that leg would be really difficult to raise like this so I changed that...), I hope it does look kinda like your Alise ? Sorry if it doesn't, I'm not too well with inches and stuff.
It would be pretty long to explain what I did and why on this drawing so uh, I would suggest you to try using posemaniacs maybe ? (the website), or at least references ? It would make your drawings improve a looot !
Theeen, the colors sure are bright ! but I have to ask, did you scan or did you take a picture ? Does your drawing actually look like that ? Because it looks a bit orange-ish, you see, so I'm wondering if it was on purpose.
Theeen, we can see you tried to think about her outfit and all, so you have a good point here, and you didn't draw someone just... standing her, tried to show a bit her personnality, so, good point here too !
So I'd say the really big problem is the anatomy, because it is what makes a character look more REAL. I'd suggest you to practice some more ? Don't worry, once you've started practicing, you improve really fast ! So good luck !